Another Love Poem

Another Love Poem

As my blood punds through my body

Desire courses through my veins

Endowing an endless stream of passion

Corrupting my very soul

Your caress fuels my desire

Finding Heaven in the softest touch

You guide my senses

Blinding me.... blinding me

Your touch feeds my soul

I cannot live without you

Empty is my heart without

You beside me in entangled embrace

Our bodies thrashing for more

Melting us into one

Consuming all doubt

As our lips fuse our souls

The world dissapears

Faster and faster my heart explodes

Sending fire within every touch

Slowly we embrace life

Savoring the unbridaled passion

Reaching for the moon

And finding Heaven

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the below lines dear TeeMarie.
"Savoring the unbridaled passion
Reaching for the moon
And finding Heaven"
The above lines are needed. We need love to be near and to be kind. Thank you for sharing the wonderful and amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

[Unspoken poet]

This is full of love and passion, I really enjoyed this write

[Betty Hermelee]

a poem of love and passion and the need to be entwined with each other. One must always reach for the moon, as it looks upon our passion with a wink and a smile. I like the line" desire courses through my veins"
certainty a love poem of sweet caresses.
Nice work!
Best, Betty

[Tina]

Loved your poem ,but did you , my blood pounds?

[Neville]

... sounds like you got it bad ... how good is that ... very, if you ask me .. very much enjoyed my new found literary friend ...

... Neville

[Kerra]

This is a wonderful write

[Sami Khalil]

Good lines through and through. You are going higher and higher. Romance is smiling and dancing.

[TeeMarie91]

aww thanks you are so sweet!!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Take care.

[TeeMarie91]

can you please post comments on ALL my writings??