Your Love

love poem

Wisps of distant memories,

Are dancing in my soul;

The sweetness and the sadness,

Will follow wherever I go.

For I will take you with me, My heart will hold you near;

While wisps of distant memories, Will mingle with my tears.

Arms that held me with such strength, Will hold me still, at night;

In dreams of you, my comfort comes, Until the morning light.

Then in the dawn of each new day, I'll look there for your face;

In wisps of distant memories, Time never can erase.

I'll see you in the evening, In the setting of the day;

Your memory will hold me near, You'll never be far away.

When I am standing on the shore, And waves come crashing in;

I will hear your voice as it whispers, Upon the ocean wind.

Deep within my shattered heart, Amid the bittersweet pain;

In wisps of distant memories, Your love will still remain

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'When I am standing on the shore, And waves come crashing in;
I will hear your voice as it whispers, Upon the ocean wind.
Deep within my shattered heart, Amid the bittersweet pain;
In wisps of distant memories, Your love will still remain'

Sensitively thought but firmly laid emotions from start to finish and excellent metre.. This poem is what gentlyt considered creativity. What a fine poet you are.. kudos and even more.

[Abishai100]

Great sensory imagery texturing, you can feel what you want to say, and you might enjoy exploring the idea of crafting 'space' in terms of distance(s). Thanks for sharing!

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