My First Love

My first love ended as quickly as it came.

First love is gone, first love so long.

He fell in love with haunted eyes,

Depressed and dried, green and shy.

My first love lasted only a month.

First love was short, first love abort.

He promised he would never leave,

The broken girl, his alleged world.

My first love I had to let go.

First love goodbye, first love don’t cry.

He is still my friend, 

Perhaps one day, he’ll be my love again.

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

Always liked that saying. I love you as a friend now. It's like the hammer lightly hitting you on the head.

[T. Edana Talbott]

Thank you for reading, Paul.

[Bacchus]

sounds true but fleeting...
which makes it feel very young
and inexperienced... but isn't that the truth with our firsts?

[T. Edana Talbott]

Thank you for reading. I believe it is a lot of the time.

[wordman]

love will come,love will go,but true love will only grow

[T. Edana Talbott]

I agree :) Thank you so much for reading!

[Troy Allan Poe]

I remember my first love.

[T. Edana Talbott]

I hope the memories were somewhat fond. Thank you for reading :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Love the rhymes and the perspective it's written. Heart touching story and has a hopeful ending!

[T. Edana Talbott]

Thank you so much!

[AmandaFuller]

Wow this is very beautiful and so very relatable! Wonderful work!

[T. Edana Talbott]

Thanks a lot, Amanda!

[AmandaFuller]

No problem.

[AmandaFuller]

Wow this is very beautiful and so very relatable! Wonderful work!