If the date attached to your author's note is anything to go by, then I'd say, I'm amaze that something so, last year (excuse my french) can seem so fresh; evergreen, even. I think this is one everyone can relate to, cause even those who unfortunately, fall in to the stereotype of 'false friends' often have false friends who look and act just as your poem relates.
It's a great poem. Love your style --the simplicity is refreshing. And I hope to see this years dated poem soon. Good one, Edana. Good one.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much! And yes, this was from last year. I'm so happy you like it!
If the date attached to your author's note is anything to go by, then I'd say, I'm amaze that something so, last year (excuse my french) can seem so fresh; evergreen, even. I think this is one everyone can relate to, cause even those who unfortunately, fall in to the stereotype of 'false friends' often have false friends who look and act just as your poem relates.
It's a great poem. Love your style --the simplicity is refreshing. And I hope to see this years dated poem soon. Good one, Edana. Good one.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much! And yes, this was from last year. I'm so happy you like it!
This was a very good read, using simplicity and straightforwardness as a strength.
Those false friends almost come to serve as the grey area in our lives, where we're forced to pick a side afterwards; where we can take the crap they've given us and either become them, or be better in spite of them.
Again, a fine read. :) I enjoyed this.
"Sometimes when i look up I see stars
that cut through the sky and fade quickly into nothingness
and i pray that you aren't as fleeting,
because when we're lying in roads i get the same feeling
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