I think few really have tasted love or have come close.... The world has become closed minded and passion and romance forgotten. You wrote a very eloquent piece displaying your emotions with good imagery. Keep writing, I look forward to more...
I think few really have tasted love or have come close.... The world has become closed minded and passion and romance forgotten. You wrote a very eloquent piece displaying your emotions with good imagery. Keep writing, I look forward to more...
Very sad, and evokes heartbreak pain... I can feel the melancholic tune in my mind after reading the poem... Our sad it is that people love us by thinking that we are someone else that they used to love before us... There is nothing more painful in love than this, a relationship cannot stand only on lies and apologies... After sometime it becomes horrible for the one who truly dreamed about the relationship... So well presented work frnd...
Sincerely
Dhiman
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
I could not agree more, lies and apologies are not what makes a fulfilling and long lasting relation.. read moreI could not agree more, lies and apologies are not what makes a fulfilling and long lasting relationship. Thank you so much for taking the time to read.
"Sometimes when i look up I see stars
that cut through the sky and fade quickly into nothingness
and i pray that you aren't as fleeting,
because when we're lying in roads i get the same feeling
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