Would You?

 

 

Would you miss me if I left?
Would you cry, if I lied?
Would you do whatever just to make me stay?
 

Hold me, Hold me…
Closer and tightly…
Don’t ever let go, tell me you’re in-love,
Because this I need to know..
 

If I stopped smiling,
Would you make me laugh again?
Would you listen to my troubles,
Like the truest friend?
 

Hold me, Hold me…
Closer and tightly…
Don’t ever let go, tell me you’re in-love,
Because this I need to know...
 

Would you watch me cry before you,
Each and every time he lies?
Well would you?
 

Hold me, Hold me…
Closer and tightly…
Don’t ever let go, tell me you’re in-love,
Because this I need to know..

Author's Note

At the time I had been going through an old journal of mine full of poetry that I wrote while I was much younger. This is one of the poems...I'd like to post my older stuff first...and then my newer works.

Reviews

[William Liston]

Well, if your older pieces are of this quality, I'd kill to read your newer works. I'm sure you've gotten a lot better, and I look forward to seeing that.

As for this poem, I loved it. I really enjoyed the light-hearted tone you used, and the visual presentation was enthralling to say the least. This was beautiful. Great work.

-William Liston

[T. Edana Talbott]

Your comment was so uplifting, thank you! I very much appreciate your kind review.

[AmandaFuller]

I really do love this, great job!

[T. Edana Talbott]

Thank you so much, Amanda!

[AmandaFuller]

No problem!!