Halved

Egyptian Poem #2! This is about God of Earth Geb being separated from Sky Goddess Nut. (In View Of Ra)

People feel sad for you, I do as well

But I must separate you, I have to tell

You cause too much trouble connecting two lives

So now, I must put you two down to size

I call upon Shu! The God of The Winds

So there will be no more suspicious hiding

I see all now, whatever you do

It will be Geb and Nut, separated by Shu

I empathise with you, I do, I feel sad

But you have made the heavens and Amun mad

So I separate you now forever in a rift

You will never connect again, even in an unexpected lift

Both of you are Halved now, nothing to expect

But I am only a card in a larger deck...

Reviews

[jason new]

hummmmmmmmm i like it, not sure if you made the letters big on purpose but it helps bring more strength to the write