Life is a roller coaster

Life is a roller coaster

A Poem by Tech
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Number 10 in Set up for a series.

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I push, you pull

I give, you take

Like a gyro being tilted

Around and around we go

 

I try , you slack

I care, you neglect

Like a roller coaster with no breaks

Around and around we go

 

I retract, you string me along

I leave, you bring me back

Like a spinning top in a vacuum

Around and around we go

© 2015 Tech


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the to-ing and fro-ing in this reminds me of a tug of war except its probably more likely to be a tug of love, well imagined and executed here Tech.
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tech

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much and you nailed the theme. :)
ANTO

9 Years Ago

:))) it was your crafting that was the nailing my friend - very well done. :)
The writer is the creater of the roller coaster because of all the ups and downs and cork screwing we create for our readers this is LIFE nice job

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on January 3, 2015
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