Screwdriver: Yours & Mine

His little drop of poison was my nightmare.

Yours:

Just a little Vodka

Just a little juice.

It is just one drink,

Just an amount of poison.

 

Mine:

Just a little pain.

Just a little blood.

Just submission.

It is just one drink.

 

Yours: Just denial.

 

Mine: Just regret.

 

-7211

Author's Note

Um...yes. Alcohol equaled abuse.

Reviews

[Gone]

Same old story. I deal with it's aftermath so often. Thank you for sharing this. it took courage and strength to do so. Nicely laid out poem too. I love the way you chose opposit alignment and text sizes to emphasise the differences. I agree with Rick and Ms. Gruye's comments. Excellent write

[Rick Puetter]

Hi 7211,

Ah, submission on not one, but two people to alcohol. One made large by alcohol, one made small. That's how it goes and perfectly written here: one denial and one regret.

Very best regards,

Rick

[Ms. Gruye]

I like the choice you made in the font sizes, I just wish yours was the one in bigger more substantial font, you deserve it!!!!