Petals of Gold

Petals of Gold

A Poem by 7211
"

Autumn, a brightness that you see and you cannot help but be filled.

"

Fall.      Autumn.

           Too lovely. Too breathtaking.

Yellow.        Saffron.          My favorite.

And when the wind blows, and the sun shines behind the golden flesh, such illumination. Bleeding gold. Blending into a painted masterpiece,

          Like silk chiffon.

It releases miniscule droplets.

Swirling gold.

                          Will never stop.

It would be the climax of my life. Oh...to die in the middle. The center of fabric and paint.

             Amongst petals of gold.

                   -7211

© 2010 7211


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wow-this is a superb expressionistic piece of impressionistic poetry-God-Gorgeous (:


Posted 13 Years Ago


Your discription of Autumns Fall is both beautiful and gentle.
A vista of colour, saturated with marvelous textures, a perfect picture painted

Posted 14 Years Ago


Autumn is definitely one of my favorite seasons and you described it beautifully! ^_^ The Autumn you described sounds rich... I'm greedy for MORE!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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7211

Modesto, CA



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