You & Me.

You & Me.

A Poem by Mistaken Angel
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Dedicated to my boy, Matthew Johnston. Through thick & thin.

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My heart is empty,
when i'm not with you.
I hope you know,
that my feelings are true.
My heads a shambles,
when you're not there.
I can't think clear,
that's how much I care.
My deepest desires for,
when It can finally be,
simply You & Me.

© 2016 Mistaken Angel


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it is a tough road parenting our children to adulthood ... getting to that place when parent and adult child share as adults ...mutually respectful ..it is, most certainly, give and take on both sides ... you express some deep psychological/emotional anguish ... almost too much from a parent .. i am left wondering if at the closing you are implying a divorce ...
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mistaken Angel

8 Years Ago

To be fairly honest, I am not completely sure how I am feeling. I guess that's why I write, it helps.. read more
Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

putting things down on paper can be very clarifying can't it!? i suppose it is the one major reason .. read more
Mistaken Angel

8 Years Ago

Aww, You as well! Enjoy your day!



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I really love this poem. I am a big sucker for romance poems and this is right up there with some of the best that I have ever read. Wonderful job with this one

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mistaken Angel

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I guess the big thing is my feelings are true. My poems all come from my heart, f.. read more
Jordan Smith

8 Years Ago

Your are Most certainly Welcome :)
Sweet and kind words for love.
"simply You & Me."
True peace when two people can know joy together. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mistaken Angel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote, nothing can compare to true happiness.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I agree and you are welcome.
Very impressive and beautiful piece....
Powerful words .... I really love this... Awesome work... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mistaken Angel

8 Years Ago

Thank You!
Unknown Poet

8 Years Ago

Welcome friend :)
it is a tough road parenting our children to adulthood ... getting to that place when parent and adult child share as adults ...mutually respectful ..it is, most certainly, give and take on both sides ... you express some deep psychological/emotional anguish ... almost too much from a parent .. i am left wondering if at the closing you are implying a divorce ...
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mistaken Angel

8 Years Ago

To be fairly honest, I am not completely sure how I am feeling. I guess that's why I write, it helps.. read more
Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

putting things down on paper can be very clarifying can't it!? i suppose it is the one major reason .. read more
Mistaken Angel

8 Years Ago

Aww, You as well! Enjoy your day!

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Added on April 29, 2016
Last Updated on April 29, 2016
Tags: #Lust, #Feelings, #FinallyForever

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Mistaken Angel
Mistaken Angel

Invercargill, Glengarry, New Zealand



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