The Final Storm.

Emotion washed over her body,

as she sat watching the waves crash,

against the fragile old wooden pier.

A storm was threatening to unleash,

much like the one brewing inside her,

but they lay dormant only releasing a flood of tears.

Unwanted memories haunt her mind,

refusing to give her an moments solace,

from all the pain she desperately tried to leave behind.

Unwilling to face her devastating inner turmoil,

she gracefully stood whispering her final goodbye,

before diving into the sea with a welcoming smile.

Reviews

[richieb]

Vivid description of letting go of life and hoping to escape from the tormenting pain that stalks the unfortunate. Good description to lead the reader to feel your thoughts. Thank you.
Richie b.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong description led to sad ending.
"Unwilling to face her devastating inner turmoil,
she gracefully stood whispering her final goodbye,
before diving into the sea with a welcoming smile."
The above ending. Final and sad. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jordan Smith]

Very moving piece. This really gave a whole new light to the topic of inner turmoil. Great write

[Unknown Poet]

I really enjoyed this beautiful piece....
Thank you for sharing this :)

[Mistaken Angel]

Thank You for your kind review! (:

[Unknown Poet]

Welcome ... :)

[Treylee]

This one really hits home right now. Beautiful writing.

[Mistaken Angel]

Thank You, I really appreciate your review!