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A Poem by Mistaken Angel
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I don't have a name, for this is simply my pain.

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My hearts suffocating with all the pain.
Slowly dyeing, this time no one can fix the break.
Drowning in my own tears...
Trying to forget your name.
But no matter what, 
The memories of you will live on and haunt my brain.

We were so close...
Together forever,
Through thick and thin.

You use to hold me tight, and kiss me goodnight.
Some how you made me feel safe,
You made me feel loved.
I truly believed that absolutely nothing would break us up.

We were 'best friends', 
But now that's gone.
I just want you to know...
That I will love you, forever more!

© 2016 Mistaken Angel


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Good work here. This poem is pretty intense. I know what its like to have some one in your life who you thought that would never leave. Some one who you thought would hold your tight forever. When that some one is gone it hurts us, our heart, our soul, our mind. Yet their memories somehow still remain. Great way to sum up how it feels. The emotion is intense and very clear. Your message is clearly made. Good work here. I love your writing and can not to read more of it. Keep up the good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mistaken Angel

8 Years Ago

Thank you, your review is the first thing that has been able to make me smile in two whole days! Muc.. read more
Curtis.Lenker

8 Years Ago

Not a problem. I am glad I could make you smile.



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Good work here. This poem is pretty intense. I know what its like to have some one in your life who you thought that would never leave. Some one who you thought would hold your tight forever. When that some one is gone it hurts us, our heart, our soul, our mind. Yet their memories somehow still remain. Great way to sum up how it feels. The emotion is intense and very clear. Your message is clearly made. Good work here. I love your writing and can not to read more of it. Keep up the good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mistaken Angel

8 Years Ago

Thank you, your review is the first thing that has been able to make me smile in two whole days! Muc.. read more
Curtis.Lenker

8 Years Ago

Not a problem. I am glad I could make you smile.

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Mistaken Angel
Mistaken Angel

Invercargill, Glengarry, New Zealand



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