It Hurts..

It Hurts..

A Poem by Mistaken Angel
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Forever Alone.

"
It hurts.
It hurts when you're alone,
when you wake up crying and you just want to be held..
but you're lying in bed with no one to hold.
No one to comfort you,
or warm you when you're cold.
It hurts when you know you're not good enough for anyone to love,
because you're just a burden and there's nothing good about you.
You're not 'beautiful', nor 'skinny'.
in fact you're the complete opposite.
It hurts when you've got no one,
and it's no ones fault..
but your own.

© 2016 Mistaken Angel


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expresses feeling way too many young people feel (and older) but especially young people (women in particular) inadequacy and insecurities bedevil all of us to some degree ..but add a group of horrible bullies to the mix and it can be insurmountable without some one to stand with us ... just to be held can be so powerful ..but we need that person to truly care about us ..not selfish ... turning our pain inward and blaming ourselves is a big mistake ...we need to stop that like right now ;) i am a firm believer in counseling ... seeking it until the right one offers the help we might need for a while .. i am seeing something in your poems that is honest and uncomplicated ..refreshing ... love and peace
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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expresses feeling way too many young people feel (and older) but especially young people (women in particular) inadequacy and insecurities bedevil all of us to some degree ..but add a group of horrible bullies to the mix and it can be insurmountable without some one to stand with us ... just to be held can be so powerful ..but we need that person to truly care about us ..not selfish ... turning our pain inward and blaming ourselves is a big mistake ...we need to stop that like right now ;) i am a firm believer in counseling ... seeking it until the right one offers the help we might need for a while .. i am seeing something in your poems that is honest and uncomplicated ..refreshing ... love and peace
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very sad poem.
"It hurts when you've got no one,
and it's no ones fault..
but your own."
When we know loneliness. Sometime we need this time to gather thoughts and life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mistaken Angel

8 Years Ago

You're welcome, Thank you for the review.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Mistaken Angel
Mistaken Angel

Invercargill, Glengarry, New Zealand



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Full of emotions, No one to hear. All I have is my paper and pen. more..

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