Ride or Die?

Lips locked,

Legs entwined..

I'll forever be by your side.

Pulling hair,

Kinky bites..

I won't give you up without a fight.

Long nights,

Morning cuddles..

Everything with you feels so right.

Where would I be without you?

My Ride or Die.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

made me smile as i have owned HD motorcycles since 1967 ... :) yes i am getting to be the "old" guy .. if you read my about me you will find i am not educated in writing and profess to have continued to attempt it because i am very bad at cross word puzzles ..which are said to hold Alzheimer's at bay ...so please take my comments with the proverbial grain of salt ... i think this is a straight forward poem that puts me in a scene easily imagined ... your closing line reveals the extremes of the love ... i have only begun to read your poems but have you tried using some adjectives to flavor or color ... or nouns to bring out senses of smell etc. ..just some thoughts :)
E.

[Mistaken Angel]

Thank you, I appreciate the feed back. I will try using more adjectives, I'll let you know how it goes.

[Unknown Poet]

Nice writing... Short and sweet erotic piece..

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words and thoughts. You took the reader with you on a wild and fun ride. Good ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Mistaken Angel]

Thank You Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[ANTO]

I'm oblivious to the reference in the final line but I can say that all that goes prior to it is beautiful.
Lovely imagery and sentiment.

[Mistaken Angel]

Thank you, means alot.

[ANTO]

Care to explain the last line for an inquisitive reader? :)

[Mistaken Angel]

It practicably means, without you I don't have a life..

[ANTO]

Well then that certainly does tie the poem up nicely. Thank you for explaining that to me. I appreciate it. :)

[Mistaken Angel]

You're more than welcome.(: