Scared of commitment.

Scared of commitment.

A Poem by Mistaken Angel

He has tattoos all over his skin..
but he's scared of commitment.
Maybe he doesn't see her as a work of art..
or maybe he just doesn't think the pain is worth it?

© 2016 Mistaken Angel


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The font is too big. I like your poem and I think you make good points. I think responsibility also plays a large part of commitment.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can totally relate with this, it speaks to me so much.
Its short but that's all it need to be. Great work! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mistaken Angel

9 Years Ago

Thank You (:
Violet Stone

9 Years Ago

Your welcome! x
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I like the idea behind your words. The tattoo and pain images. Thoughtful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mistaken Angel

9 Years Ago

Thank you, it was one of those thought's that wouldn't go away.. so I decided maybe it was meant to .. read more
V

9 Years Ago

Yeah, I know that feeling but I don't share everything I write down, I'm really critical with myself.. read more

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Added on February 14, 2016
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Mistaken Angel
Mistaken Angel

Invercargill, Glengarry, New Zealand



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Full of emotions, No one to hear. All I have is my paper and pen. more..

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