Taken Forgranted.

Taken Forgranted.

A Poem by Mistaken Angel

Love is a strong word,
but every time I said it I meant it!
For you I would of moved the world,
but you took me for granted.
When I needed you the most,
you were unfaithful.
I still love you,
and I will for a long long time!
But no matter what I wont let you break my heart with another lie.
I'm too strong for you now..
So I guess this is goodbye.

© 2016 Mistaken Angel


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I liked the honest emotion and realistic thoughts in the words.
"Love is a strong word,
but every time I said it I meant it!"
Liars do get caught and one day. They learn.They released a rare love. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love the ambivalence in your poem. It is so true to life. We move on, still stinging from the pain & lies, but we're steeling ourselves to never let that happen again. You show how a person holds the love & longing in his/her heart, and at the same time, being totally DONE with this crap! We are often walking paradoxes, we feeble humans. And you've showed us this portrait painted very realistically. Good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the honest emotion and realistic thoughts in the words.
"Love is a strong word,
but every time I said it I meant it!"
Liars do get caught and one day. They learn.They released a rare love. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 11, 2016
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Mistaken Angel
Mistaken Angel

Invercargill, Glengarry, New Zealand



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