When a person tells you that you hurt them you don't get to decide that you didn't

Today I told you that you hurt me

Not physically but emotionally

To the point where I question the smallest details in life

And you cannot deny that you hurt me

So I figured I would tell you why

You took my heart and crumpled it into a million little pieces

Just like you'd crumple up a dead autumn leaf

You took my mind and played a little game

It didn't matter which game you played

Because you acted like a child and cheated anyways

So now when you deny that you hurt me you can't

Because you can't decide that what you did was not hurtful

-t.c.

Reviews

[A.marie.speaks]

Loved the imagery of your heart being a crumbled autumn leaf. The ending lines have a ton of "you's" in it which distracted me a bit but I think your concept was dead on and relatable. I have definitely been there before.

[D.T.]

Pretty good. I like the "it didn't matter which game you played, because you acted like a child and cheated anyways."

[Tayler]

Thank you (: