You wrecked me

You wrecked me

A Poem by Tina

You wrecked me. I lay Tangled and torn.
 Twisted and maimed. Bloody and 
unrecognizable. I let you drink and drive 
my heart. You're shaken but untouched. 
Undamaged by your Carnage. You left me
 to die and I am dead to you. But I survived. 
I sit scarred and disfigured. Unable to find
 all the pieces of the woman I used to be. 
My life fell apart but I'm still hoping to
find love that is true and not careless with 
my heart.


03/05/15

© 2021 Tina


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Very emotional read and heart tugging

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
Kerra

3 Years Ago

no problem
That is behind me now. right now I do have purpose helping my parents

Posted 3 Years Ago


Have you "come back" from that dark place and brought purpose back into your life?

Posted 3 Years Ago


It is sad when love damage our mind and our soul. Take time to heal, if we can. Thank you dear Tina for sharing the amazing poetry. You made the reader understand the emotions in the words.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Tina.
The bite of this one is quite real. So many find their lives impacted this way.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading. It was a very devastating time in my life
Chris

3 Years Ago

Could tell from the opening lines...
A car crash ending to a relationship. Loved the extended metaphor you have used here Tina. You are a survivor. You are still hopeful.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

3 Years Ago

. Thank you for reading. Yes I try to stay positive and strong about every situation.

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Added on July 23, 2021
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