Burn rubber

Burn rubber

A Poem by Tina
"

When you've had enough, you've had enough.

"
I can't believe I left. Sitting here in my car
 trying to forget you and sort my life out again.
 This time alone. That word alone. Like an empty 
house stripped of its remnants. Picked clean by 
vultures, Much like my heart. You took from it what
 you wanted and left it in Ruins. I turned away from
 you and all I cherished. All I had accomplished was
 lost in my dust As I headed towards my freedom.
 I'm home again having to start over , to heal my
 heart and rebuild my life.


04/10/14

© 2021 Tina


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Such honest but raw pain.. how hurt you are but, also, so courageous. Here you are at the end of your poem, announcing your intention - ' headed towards my freedom. I'm home again having to start over , to heal my heart and rebuild my life. '

If your poem is true and was written 2021, I truly hope you're happier and more settled now.. Hugs and best wishes for 2024

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

11 Months Ago

I'm single but much happier..thank you.
emmajoygreen

11 Months Ago

Good.. truly pleased for you - in spite of..



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Such honest but raw pain.. how hurt you are but, also, so courageous. Here you are at the end of your poem, announcing your intention - ' headed towards my freedom. I'm home again having to start over , to heal my heart and rebuild my life. '

If your poem is true and was written 2021, I truly hope you're happier and more settled now.. Hugs and best wishes for 2024

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

11 Months Ago

I'm single but much happier..thank you.
emmajoygreen

11 Months Ago

Good.. truly pleased for you - in spite of..
Wow. I know this feeling so completely. It's always difficult to start over at the beginning with nothing, not even the hopes and dreams we once had for ourselves. The later in life the resurrection needs to apply, the more difficult it seems to rise. This was a painful piece but sometimes we must suffer whatever it takes to get back the pieces of ourselves we've given away or had stolen. Great write full of honest reflection. Bless, F.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and for your input
Sometimes we just have to rebuild alone before we can share our heart's dwelling with another.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

3 Years Ago

So true. Thank you for reading
Visually impactful. To feel your heart is like a carcas picked clean by a vulture is the pits. Takes courage to say enough us enough. Taking control is the best thing you can do in this type of situation.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

3 Years Ago

I did, I left her this poem is about leaving her
Takes strength to act - especially when there are known consequences as well as unknown ones.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 23, 2021
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Hi I'm Tina. I've written short stories and poetry off and on for years. I enjoy reading poetry. A lot of my short stories do leave people wanting to know more, I like that. Whenever I try to write .. more..

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