Something more

Something more

A Poem by Tanya

Your life was a world of color,
now it seems it's black and cold.
To many careless mistakes,
got you nowhere and now your empty,
afraid of what the future holds.
The tears seem like a wild waterfall,
you're helpless and tied down to one memory,
that always seems to bring a million more.
As much as you want to scream out the truth,
your voice shuts down on you and your blood turns cold.
For a moment you feel blank and lifeless,
till you realize maybe there's something more.

© 2015 Tanya


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Always much more to look forward to.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tanya

9 Years Ago

That|s right, no nothing how low you are feeling, it can always get better. Thank you for the revi.. read more
I felt a bit of a chill when I read the line about the voice shutting down.
I think I've experienced this feeling too more than once. But some hope will always shine through.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tanya

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, I wrote this a few years back for a dear friend, who ended up getting very.. read more
Cherry Pepperweb

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)

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Tanya
Tanya

Montreal, Quebec, Canada



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