My mistakes

The killer this will proberly have 3 parts i dont know yet.

'Come on mann it's just a girl' si roared at me.
I couldn't she looked like my mum before....
I gulped and pulled out my pen knife could i really do this?
I mean she might just be a girl but she has feelings... right?
'Come on!' he roared again 'she killed your mum do it!'
'Right' i whispered.
The cold wind brushesd in my face she deservs this.
She started back at me and i winked *Hustle , hustle* she walked a little faster.
So did i i sped up leading her into a corner
'Give me your money' i whiseperd into her ear holding the knife to her neck 'or' *zipp*
I got carried away and dug the knife into her neck and dragged it felt so right!

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oh my berries that's so scary!
*six weeks later*
*me looking out the window*
maybe i'm ready to leave my house.
*remembers: "I got carried away and dug the knife into her neck and dragged it felt so right!"*
*thinks* you know what i think i'll be safer inside my house hehehe!