VEIL

 

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rodden terrains over and above the still exile,

Where the Queen of doom visions her destiny-pacifies amid wraith.

She strides on sweltering thorns twisted in tumult of genocide.

And hails the fire in frost in the appellation of faith.

 

Behold the veil of chastisement, reticence and diffidence;

Proclaiming a lust intertwined with shades of dark dust-violet.

Thunderous wild whispers do consume her essence,

Beneath the curtains, two fasciae obscure in one perpetual rivulet.

 

Through the incandescent glow of her clandestine eyes,

She ferries her fancy through the gates wide and wooden.

And stalks infinity deep into the cerulean crass of deep and skies,

Serendipity soars; identities are lost and hidden.

 

A blurred entity buried deep in the shales,

Akin to that of a crook’s blurred visage prevails.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and wonderful use of words.
"She strides on sweltering thorns twisted in tumult of genocide.
And hails the fire in frost in the appellation of faith."
It was a dark poem and the above lines. Perfect. Thank you Tazeen for sharing the outstanding poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you sir coyote. I'm inspired by your reviews!

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad. I enjoyed this poem and you are welcome.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Wow! I was blown away by this one. Just the use of words drew me in to every last little morsel. I really enjoyed reading it, contemplating it, exploring its meanings and deep thought provoking inclusions

[Fahmida Mehreen]

"Through the incandescent glow of her clandestine eyes,
She ferries her fancy through the gates wide and wooden.
And stalks infinity deep into the cerulean crass of deep and skies,
Serendipity soars; identities are lost and hidden."

Loved the words and the complimenting photo. Rich use of words.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

I always wonder what’s going on behind the veils- mysterious sexy in a way- never knowing what’s kept behind that luring lustful lonesome life at times- living to someone’s desire- not being totally honest with themselves?? Great words🌹

[Aryan]

This sounds like The Four Horsemen......Wonderful!!!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you!

[Inda]

This is fantastic! I especially like how in the the visage prevails. For in life lies are constantly prevailing as are liars and crooks. Moreover i enjoy your style of writing and the great flow of this piece, good job.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

You are right! Absolutely. Your reviews are really encouraging. Thank you so much ^_^

[Najam Us Saher]

You never fail to paint a picture in reader's mind through the description you use in your poem.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I'm glad you enjoyed, Najam. Thank you so much for visiting me:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺