EUPHORIC FANTASY

 

Meditating in a stream of lusty warmth

Frost moistens the hues of translucent mirror

Scribbled ink signals etched on watery windows

A crippled brain wondering solo and choruses fluttering

Hooked on the indefinite plot whilst rainbow shades penetrate

Drizzling rain slakes the craving for rejuvenation

Triggering time ticks; entwining in wicked tricks

Blurred, black days evaporate thru fire embracing dullness

Like a mystic fairy, a flibbertigibbet soars and sails up high

 

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is welcome.

Reviews

[Isabella Ivy]

A patchwork of words... Just enough to take you to this lovely place and leave you desiring more. Most pleasantly penned. I.I.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts. I liked the artwork and the visions create by your words. You create beautiful place and needing ending. Thank you Tazeen for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I really thank you for an insightful and well-visioned review!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[apennylate]

Taz... You iz like the Tasmanian devil of stunning imagery... As soon as I think I can nail down what you are saying... Whoosh... Another rug of knit wonder sweeps me off my mental feet... Penetration of rainbow shades and flibber-whatever-its-called soaring free... This was a delicious blend of insanity and sanity... Welcome to wonderland...

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Flavourful review...whoa I like me being the 'tasmanian devil of imagery'
Sounds like a cool title.
Thank you so much Silente!

[apennylate]

Of course, it IS a badass title... You are welcome

[Fahmida Mehreen]

The metaphors work perfectly to draw a picture on the readers' mind. The brevity of the poem kept its essence intact all the way.

Totally liked your work.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I'm glad you liked it and connected with the very spirit of it. thank you! :)

[Jimmy Yetts]

Dazzling imagery; intricate narrative.
"Like a mystic fairy" tale.
Gorgeous stuff!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Jimmy for taking the time to read! I really appreciate it.

[Carol Cashes]

The picture is spot on for this piece...or is it the other way around. In any case, I sometimes struggle with poetry, but this, dear, was a sensations (image/emotion) sentiment.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Carol for reading and sensing this poem.
Nice to meet you:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think you're the second teenager around here who I came by who doesn't write like a teenager, which is a good thing :) I love your word choices, the images you conjured with them, quite vivid. Love the phrase ' crippled brain wondering solo'. Brilliant write, I think :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Yumna! Those words matter a great deal to me.
Btw, who's the first? (since you're a regular member.)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh, the first one being William Liston here. I think he's quite ahead of his years. Even I've learnt from him a lot. :)

You're welcome, Tazeen. A pleasure reading :)

[Zoya]

Seems like a wonderful rendition of a fantasy land. Was quite vivid. Beautifully written!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Oh! Thank you for such a beautiful review, Zoe.

[Zoya]

No worries

[Ashwin Shanker]

Quite a few words went over my head :) ... Maybe I am not as evolved as you to write a poem like this one

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I love playing with words;)
One of my poems featured in Times of India and guess what, my father couldn't understand a word of it:p
I sent it to my english teacher, she was speechless.
You are indeed a great artist. Thank you so much!!

[Farhan Shaikh]

very good imagination..loved it totally

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thanks Farhan. :)