YOU CAN DO IT!

Doodle

You are not born to live

.Like a slave.

*You are a leader*

_A leader of your desires_

Not fantasies

You are born to be FREE

­…To be what you want to be…

“Be the change”

You have brains

In your head

You have feet

In your shoes

Go your destination

For the control is

In your hands

You’re the fish

The fish that can’t climb a tree

You’re the fish

That rules every breathe of the sea

DON’T GET DEPRESSED

Depressed out of lowliness

Or surely your assets would perish

So don’t let the SMILE on your face

Fade away

Be the ‘moon’

The leader of the twinkling stars

In the sky; the universe

DO NOT LOSE HOPE

Hope like the light of sun

The sun that shines everyday

With a deafening glow

That takes away the pale looks

And gifts to us

 Shining faces

AN OBSTACLE

IS A STEPPING STONE

BUT DISTRACTIONS

ARE DEVASTATIONS

DON’T RUN

AFTER  SUCCESS

SEARCH  FOR

EXCELLENCE

FOR $MONEY IS NOT

EVERYTHING

BUT THE UNIVERSE IS MADE OF

LOVE & BELIEF

So say with me

A magical word

“I CAN DO IT”

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sapientiam]

This is something I think everyone needs to see because this tells the unrestrained truth about how we live our lives. We always look at our mistakes or dwell on our failures, but if we try to build onto our strengths and tell ourselves "I can do it"... It could change our entire attitude, even if they are just four words. You are such an inspiring person that has so much hope. Great job!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Glad to hear from you! I absolutely agree with your views and this is what this simple poem is crafted for. Although I just wrote it randomly when I was feeling low in my classroom. You know, It gives me sort of encouragement.
Thank you so much:::))
Cheers

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Interesting change of forms and structure. Strong words for good cause. Freedom and love. Two important things in our lives. Well done.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you for your insightful review! I really appreciate it! :)

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You welcome its great message there.

[Sami Khalil]

Very different and unique...

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much! ::))

[Brent]

Your poem has the best use of typography that I've seen. Really cool what you've done with different fonts to emphasize certain phrases.

Your affirmations in the poem make me feel powerful and able to conquer any challenges that may arise.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much Brent! I really appreciate it :)