YOU CAN DO IT!

Doodle

You are not born to live

.Like a slave.

*You are a leader*

_A leader of your desires_

Not fantasies

You are born to be FREE

­…To be what you want to be…

“Be the change”

You have brains

In your head

You have feet

In your shoes

Go your destination

For the control is

In your hands

You’re the fish

The fish that can’t climb a tree

You’re the fish

That rules every breathe of the sea

DON’T GET DEPRESSED

Depressed out of lowliness

Or surely your assets would perish

So don’t let the SMILE on your face

Fade away

Be the ‘moon’

The leader of the twinkling stars

In the sky; the universe

DO NOT LOSE HOPE

Hope like the light of sun

The sun that shines everyday

With a deafening glow

That takes away the pale looks

And gifts to us

 Shining faces

AN OBSTACLE

IS A STEPPING STONE

BUT DISTRACTIONS

ARE DEVASTATIONS

DON’T RUN

AFTER  SUCCESS

SEARCH  FOR

EXCELLENCE

FOR $MONEY IS NOT

EVERYTHING

BUT THE UNIVERSE IS MADE OF

LOVE & BELIEF

So say with me

A magical word

“I CAN DO IT”

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sapientiam]

This is something I think everyone needs to see because this tells the unrestrained truth about how we live our lives. We always look at our mistakes or dwell on our failures, but if we try to build onto our strengths and tell ourselves "I can do it"... It could change our entire attitude, even if they are just four words. You are such an inspiring person that has so much hope. Great job!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Glad to hear from you! I absolutely agree with your views and this is what this simple poem is crafted for. Although I just wrote it randomly when I was feeling low in my classroom. You know, It gives me sort of encouragement.
Thank you so much:::))
Cheers

[Lydia Shutter]

Uplifting and filled with great lines. My favorite is "Be the ‘moon’ The leader of the twinkling stars". Empowering words. Great work. Lydi**

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Lydia ! I really appreciate it.:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

very motivating and inspirational.
I loved the way you portrayed the poem with the fonts and the words...keep going

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Wajiha :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

I Can Do It...
First of all after a long time I'm reading your poem that's good but reading this is something like I got what I wanted to read in these days..
Loved it..

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Well, most people would at least read it, reason being it created to give a dose of motivation. Thank you kindly. You are always appreciated :)

[Abraham George]

nice idea and best way of expressing that. nicely done.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and wise words shared. I agree with you. Only limit is the what we accept. Thank you for sharing your powerful and worthwhile wisdom.
Coyote

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Wow! thank you for your insightful review.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this one and you are welcome my friend.

[Zoya]

Ooh, so very fascinating and encouraging. All should pay heed to those words. Lovely. Thanks for sharing!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you Zoe :)

[Zoya]

No worries

[Tony Jordan]

Words of wisdom
words of strength
Ignore the width
Feel the Length - as my old mum used to say.
Bravo Tazeen.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Wow! I'm impressed by your input. Thank you.

[Kanishka]

This is a great one. It's the much needed inspiration in the simplest of words..

[Tazeen Ahmed]

You are right!
Thank you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You have cleverly highlighted the words and you knew it which sentence needed more attention, this was a clever write and the way you have written this is very emphasising. If you would have written this in a single font without using bold, underline option it would have seemed usual. Well done, I am impressed.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Najam! I really appreciate it :::)))

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺😊

[AcasualPawn]

Unique,
I can do it.............

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you kindly:)