Luck

a quick and short write on Luck

luck isn't merely a game of time

it persists within us

enclosed in our fist

It wobbles through the veins

and imprints through the lines of our palm

Reviews

[Tbear]

That is a very interesting way of looking at luck... write on..

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much for reading ::))

[iamshadowine]

Really powerful lines!! I love it :D
keep writing :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Shadowine! :::)))

[mercy party]

I have always thought being lucky was a state of mind. Great poem and thought process here. I will keep it mind at the poker table. : ).

[Tazeen Ahmed]

thank you so much! i'm glad that you liked it!

[Johnny Dep]

True and an inspirational piece, Yeah I believe the same.Thank you for Sharing.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much for your encouraging words!!

[Great Aunt Astri]

You show a great understanding for one so young. I love 'wobbles' and of course fortune readers look at the lines on the palm. I would say you have great potential.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you for the kind review:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very true. I loved the way you have expressed in the poem that we make our own luck and our actions shape our destiny which has already been written :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you for the appreciation!

[ms. barrie]

brilliant piece that is both inspiring and compelling, painting a great msg for all -- thanks for sharing ~ xo

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much for the kind inspiration ^_^

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I'm sad that I couldn't access your writing..(it's rated mature)

[Miss Sharon]

A very nice poem with an interesting concept! ~Sharon

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you for the appreciation! ^_^

[Shabeeh Haider]

Powerful words that convey a message that luck lies deep within us.
Having said that and after seeing the pic that you have posted, the importance of prayer and divine help plays a more important role in defining luck.
Very well expressed and nice to meet you.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you sir, I'm glad the message reached you and you've sensed it well.

[Farhan Shaikh]

That is true words...shprt but powerful 😉

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you!