Antagonist of the Humankind

read on for the revelation

A step pledged against humanity

out of ignorance and notoriety

a treachery entitled to devastation

devoid of the consent of inner satisfaction

aims set to blotch blood and cause pain filled with arrogance

there arises hatred, not a pinch of benevolence

hearts,as tough as rocks

a cry of an orphan, a sigh of a widow

aren't worth melting these blocks

they worship and honor the war of bloodshed

they bow against ammunition, hot -headed

barbaric and inhumane treatment

they intend to demolish the advent

living wild, death awaits every  instance

a similar fate shall they face

when Lord will force queries of their sins unpunished

on the day of resurrection, shall they be punished

they won't be forgiven for the blasphemy

instead be granted a hell of fire fiercely blazing with vitality

 

 

 

Author's Note

They refers to "terrorists".

Reviews

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Sadly, the zeal of good men is transformed into evil acts by those in power in high places who use Freedom, God, & Country to inspire men to heinous acts of bloodshed, as men quickly forget who they were in the beginning, led by men naturally evil to commit the very evil they claim to despise ...

Though not a fan of Organized Religion, I am a fan of the Human Race, believing that there is ONLY ONE race of men (men, women, children) upon this Earth, regardless of Religion, Language, Complexion, or Nationality ... As my late cousin said so wel, "We are leaves of one tree, flowers of one garden ..."

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2-n8sPkE6gE

Your wisdom, young lady, is well beyond your years upon this Earth ... May your compassionate mind and heart continue to grow ever towards that which is good ...

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much!I completely agree with what you've said.
Most importantly, education system shapes ones brain.

People take to such acts just because they've misunderstood the meaning of religion, I.e. Peace.

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn's Dark Poetry & More]

Yes, true religion--not Organized Religion in my view--is not about converting the world to your faith in claiming that faith as the only way but, is about learning to live in peace with yourself and, thus, in peace and harmony with others ... True religion results in peace, a peace that does not find a need to convert and has no fear of those with different beliefs ... True religion that brings oneself peace, and allows one to live in peace with others, has never caused a war, has no need for war, for it has no desire to impress itself upon others ... The peace of true religion comes over those who stop preaching, stop teaching, stop judging, and begin listening and learning as Free Thinking peoples who love peace and hate war … There are very few of us …

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn

[Meshalini]

Such a powerful poem.

Well written and nice use of words.

A piece that must read by all. Well done..

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much for your kind words!! :::)))

[Ashwin Shanker]

This work is definitely one that is written from the heart. I loved how you openly expressed your rage against the constant onslaught that these beasts rage against humanity. There was fire in your words, and it set the fire within us ablaze as well. I feel this poem has the potential for a spoken-word poem. Do see if you can adapt it for the format, you could well be the next Malala Yousafzai.

I have two suggestions.
Let the description be 'Read on for the revelation'
7th line - let it be as 'hearts, as tough as rocks.'

Great work

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank for the kind and encouraging words.:)
I will adhere to your suggestions

You are appreciated !!

[Ashwin Shanker]

Thank you Tazeen.

[Sami Khalil]

One of your best. I agree wholeheartedly with the message of this wonderful poem. True and realistic. ...::: ))))

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you for the wonderful review!
I'm glad that you liked it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....::::)))))

[apennylate]

Wow... The wordplay, and syllable count are on point. Simple, yet profound...
*when Lord will force queries of their sins unpunished
on the day of resurrection, shall they be punished*

And

*they worship and honor the war of bloodshed
they bow against ammunition, hot -headed*

Really good stuff

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much!
It means a lot to me!! ^_^

[apennylate]

Of course. You are most welcome.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Fire in the belly, grace in the head for a child so young you write like a sage once said.

Regards,
Al

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Whoa! Thank you for your kind words...
I like reading and learning about religious stuff :)read moreWhoa! Thank you for your kind words...
I like reading and learning about religious stuff :)
And people oft say,"you're too young to bother about it"

[Miss Sharon]

Such a powerful write. Well done...and I am of the belief that you have indeed written the truth....the way it will happen when Christ returns for His Bride. ~Sharon

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I'm glad that you liked it!
Thank you for the kind review:)

[Lydia Shutter]

I suppose the very religious believe justice will happen in the next world. Not sure I am of that belief, but your words are powerfully written. Lydi**

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you!:)
It's a matter of peace...

[Manu]

Now, this is one really good write, Tazeen !
Actually, I too wrote something on killers of humanity (not on writers cafe)...so i can very well relate to this feeling. How innocent ones face the wrath and fury of few unkind and inhuman folks resulting in bloodshed ! You voiced out your dissatisfaction against those people and ended this write on a hopeful note !
Lets pray for the best because justice will surely be prevailed !
well done !

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Gorthi for the kind admiration!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"a similar fate shall they face
when Lord will force queries of their sins unpunished
on the day of resurrection, shall they be punished
they won't be forgiven for the blasphemy
instead be granted a hell of fire fiercely blazing with vitality"
This is reflective indeed! And a wish to see justice being brought! But that time is yet to come... This is really really good work! ☺

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Yumna for the wonderful review ! :)
Rightly said, justice will be done!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome, Tazeen! It was a pleasure ☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's superb Tazeen..Well Penned..i enjoyed from the top of the poem..keep up😊

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much! :)
And can I know the message you derived here?

[Farhan Shaikh]

their hearts being as tough as rocks
a cry of an orphan, a sigh of a widow
aren't worth melting these blocks
they worship and honor the war of bloodshed"
This line above I liked the most..A very good message about Antogonist of the Humanity ..and also the line "treachery entitled to devastation"..Very good Poem😊

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much again !!