Antagonist of the Humankind

read on for the revelation

A step pledged against humanity

out of ignorance and notoriety

a treachery entitled to devastation

devoid of the consent of inner satisfaction

aims set to blotch blood and cause pain filled with arrogance

there arises hatred, not a pinch of benevolence

hearts,as tough as rocks

a cry of an orphan, a sigh of a widow

aren't worth melting these blocks

they worship and honor the war of bloodshed

they bow against ammunition, hot -headed

barbaric and inhumane treatment

they intend to demolish the advent

living wild, death awaits every  instance

a similar fate shall they face

when Lord will force queries of their sins unpunished

on the day of resurrection, shall they be punished

they won't be forgiven for the blasphemy

instead be granted a hell of fire fiercely blazing with vitality

 

 

 

Author's Note

They refers to "terrorists".

Reviews

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Sadly, the zeal of good men is transformed into evil acts by those in power in high places who use Freedom, God, & Country to inspire men to heinous acts of bloodshed, as men quickly forget who they were in the beginning, led by men naturally evil to commit the very evil they claim to despise ...

Though not a fan of Organized Religion, I am a fan of the Human Race, believing that there is ONLY ONE race of men (men, women, children) upon this Earth, regardless of Religion, Language, Complexion, or Nationality ... As my late cousin said so wel, "We are leaves of one tree, flowers of one garden ..."

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2-n8sPkE6gE

Your wisdom, young lady, is well beyond your years upon this Earth ... May your compassionate mind and heart continue to grow ever towards that which is good ...

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much!I completely agree with what you've said.
Most importantly, education system shapes ones brain.

People take to such acts just because they've misunderstood the meaning of religion, I.e. Peace.

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn's Dark Poetry & More]

Yes, true religion--not Organized Religion in my view--is not about converting the world to your faith in claiming that faith as the only way but, is about learning to live in peace with yourself and, thus, in peace and harmony with others ... True religion results in peace, a peace that does not find a need to convert and has no fear of those with different beliefs ... True religion that brings oneself peace, and allows one to live in peace with others, has never caused a war, has no need for war, for it has no desire to impress itself upon others ... The peace of true religion comes over those who stop preaching, stop teaching, stop judging, and begin listening and learning as Free Thinking peoples who love peace and hate war … There are very few of us …

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn

[Surya]

It's a thought provoking write and I must appreciate you for penning this....go ahead good luck...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

The terrorist is different to each person. It is where you are standing. Define right or wrong? Can we?
"they worship and honor the war of bloodshed
they bow against ammunition, hot -headed
barbaric and inhumane treatment
they intend to demolish the advent
living wild, death awaits every instance
a similar fate shall they face"
Terror is where you standing. I believe the men who supply the war machine with money, gun and bullets are the true terrorist. No money, no gun, no terrorist. I saw the Middle East many times. When we came with water, food and medicine. We were savior. When we can with 500,000 soldiers. We were terror and we destroyed ancient cities and left millions homeless. My wish we spend 25% of war budget in the USA for life. Not war. The world would be a better place. A powerful poem. You made me think this morning.
Coyote

[Zoya]

This is so powerful...I could feel the resentment with which you wrote this poem. A brave write indeed!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

thank you^_^

[Bhargav]

that was one of the strongest poems I have seen in my life.. keep goin..

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Bhargav! I am first time told that I leave an impact...

[richieb]

Tazeen,
Your poem was filled with solid description and imagery. It had a biblical flavor to it. Your words were strong and sent a direct message.
Your feelings toward terroists is applauded by everyone who has witnessed their cowardly but vicious attacks.
Thank you for this fine poem.
Peace,
Richie b.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much richieb!
I really appreciate it!!I greatly agree to that and myself a believer. ^_^

[Andre Waters II]

I like this and the powerful message behind this. It's a great topic and it really puts perspective on the topic at hand today.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much for your valuable review! :)

[matrixmark]

This was really strong in words and a very thought provoking piece. The words had such and impact on me and may the terrorists burn in hell.

I applaud you for writing this piece on such a worldwide subject.

Mark.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much!
I appreciate it!!

[Muslimah Triyati]

Yeah your poem describes about terrorists that been happened in over world including in my country,too

[Tazeen Ahmed]

thank you for the review!
Yes, Indonesia also has witnessed terrorism.

[JerryB]

Ahhh . . . Not much a "believer," my new friend, but in this particular case I do sincerely hope these people who seek war and death to innocents with be roasting in hell while impaled on a spit slowly turning over the flames as they scream for the same mercy they refused all of the ones they killed.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you for the review!
I completely agree to your words and this is what my poem explains....
I really appreciate it!