Goodness won't conceal long

I leave it up to your imagination ......

a deceitful eye

that prompts exclusion

to no one I owe my heart

never have I deceived

my soul lies in peace

I have confronted the past

realizing no one cares in fact

my life lies in my hands

not an attitude of greed

I sigh , I bow my head and woe

awful , this world is phony

humanity does exist

in a magnitude tiny to the giant

loneliness prevails , I step out my qualms

let me think , let me confess

look around , goodness won't conceal long

 

 

 

Reviews

[OhSnapShley]

This is very nice. Great word play.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I appreciate your review!
Thanks you:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"this world is phony
humanity does exist
in a magnitude tiny to the giant"
Strong message given here! Good people are always around even if in a minority..you just have to have the eye to recognize them.. I liked reading this☺

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Yumna,
I'm glad you liked the message here...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome ☺

[Sir_Anonymous]

Huh... And I thought I wrote stuff that was thought provoking I'm still trying to see what your message was in this rather than my own and after reading this about three times I am not much closer... Seems you wrote something that can hold many outlets and you are only fifteen? That is indeed quite impressive.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Well, I have no problem if people understand it their way...
There are two contradictions mentioned.
It's like people would stop you from doing a thing, they will discourage you, mock you for your guts..
You are so lonely and excluded that you lose hope from this world..
But the message here is to not get discouraged and search for goodness in people /good people as humanity indeed exists

[Red Rose]

Wow. Ur poem is very sophisticated.
Good job! I love it

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you. It means a lot to this soul!!

[Red Rose]

And u r nly 15.. Awesome!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Haha and so ur just 16

[Red Rose]

Well, I guess ur right sis! ;)

[mattavelli]

Hello, Tazeen! :)
I like your message here. Perspectives have a lot to do with mood and attitude. If we practice being joyful, we get better at it. Haha

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank You:)
I'm glad you liked it!