POVERTY

poverty, the deep rooted  satire of the human race

has  pierced our  society

our recognized unity has failed apace

in contriving the dissent  against paucity

long it has thrived

and will impoverish the advancing lives

it is the onset  of  miserable times

that will drive one to contrive days based on  fights

and has  paved a way for the crimes

poverty is the scarcity , dearth or the  state of deficiency

may it not behold the worldly life

for it drives one  out of lavish  inhabitancy

And  its legacy is eternal strife

 

Reviews

[Shabeeh Haider]

Beautifully penned. We should all unite to fight poverty and make the world a better place.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you sir. Indeed driving out poverty can make the world a better place

[Swati Nayak]

wow what a beautiful use of vocab...your poem is really like a necklace with 1000 beads and the onlooker gets hooked just by looking at it..
proud to be your friend

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Whoa! That shocked me!
Thank you so much Swati, I admire your review...

read moreWhoa! That shocked me!
Thank you so much Swati, I admire your review...

[Swati Nayak]

and i your poetry

[bela]

yes you are right poverty is the scarcity , dearth or the state of deficiency. I enjoyed your poem.
well written.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you!
Glad that you liked it!!

[tanmay7551]

True! Poverty is one of the prime cause for the increasing crimes. Though it will be difficult to control considering the fact that Richer one grows more he tries to get and in the process will give birth to one more poor.

Good choice of the subject.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I appreciate your word!
Glad that you liked it!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Well said. I liked your choice of words and straight talk manner of writing. Tyfs!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very welcome

[Miss Sharon]

(poverty is the scarcity , dearth or the state of deficiency may it not behold the worldly life for it drives one out of lavish inhabitancy And its legacy is eternal strife) You indeed have captured this horrible scourge in our prolific society. ~Sharon

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you :) for the positive review...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Poverty.. The never ending issue in almost every part of the world.. Interesting choice of words...

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you 😊

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome ☺

[Mystique]

wonderfully woven words. :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you :D

[Farhan Shaikh]

👏👌..Very well Written..

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you :)
Jazakallah

[unspokenpain]

Great work. Very true and down to earth.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you, it means a lot to me!! :)