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A Poem by Taz
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A newer thing I am doing... not depressing poetry!!!

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An Empty space, can it fill?
With help of words somehow it will.
Blankness parting with every mark,
while the pages start turning more dark
Internal spirits taking a part
faster than his bullseye dart
yet slower than a healing heart
Listen close, and feel it start.
Inspiration lives inside
let it now, no longer hide
bring it forth and feel it thrive
take a breath you're still alive!
Be calm.
Be still.
Not much more to fill.
One day I woke up and I felt it you see.
Whether 2H or a simple HB
you can help your release
you can set yourself free
become who you are
and find your To Be
with your blank space
and your filler
you'll see.

© 2018 Taz


Author's Note

Taz
This is one of my more inspirational poems, this is something that I recently started writing, I hope you enjoyed!

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Inspirationally poetic, fast paced rhythmic beat. Lovely read.

With love,

Matthew

Posted 1 Year Ago


Is it written by a 17 year old girl? Fantastic is the only word I wish to say

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wonderful words of inspiration hope and endurance- all starts within and all possible if you set your mind to it-here’s to the road of healing🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


I have always loved your style of writing. Love this one it was worth reading Taz.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Loved it :) Indeed it’s inspirational :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


Amazing verse, very uplifting :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


L.O.V.E. it. Every single word. EXCELLENT work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I felt this one screaming at me from the top of its lungs. I do wish to say though if you add a between Be Calm and Be Still it will add much more dramatized voice. At least that is what I think

Posted 7 Years Ago


Such a creative piece, enjoyed it immensely!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I enjoyed the flow if this poem, as well as some of the imagery created! While I read, the scene of a journal with fresh pages came into my mind, and words appearing out of nowhere onto the pages, in beautiful script, and the pages turning as each one is filled. Great write ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Wow, I am so grateful for this wonderful imagery. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my w.. read more

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Added on October 17, 2017
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Taz
Taz

Alberta, Canada



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I like to write poems that spontaniously generate in my mind. I am 17 and I am a girl who is in high school so my poems will not be amazing but I do my best.I love my spanish and ASL,I also love basic.. more..

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