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From your biggest fan

A Poem by Taz
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This is a poem for one of my friends.

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Hair of fire 
Blue green eyes 
Kindness within 
Your presence lies 
Your song it sings 
A voice of truth 
And everyday 
It helps me through 
I will listen, learn from you 
I yearn to know the things you do 
As I am drawn 
Back to your home 
I will know 
I'm not alone 
For when I see you 
I do hear 
Your truthful music 
Loud and clear 
Because I know that you are true 
With all my soul I do thank you.

© 2018 Taz


Author's Note

Taz
This I made for a friend who has helped me so much. I would like some feedback on it before I give it to her.

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This is super cute !! Makes me thankful for having my best friend by my side !!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you, I really hope she will like it.
It was such a wonderful write! Your friend must be really lucky :) and I'm sure she'll be really happy reading this :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Sofia

7 Years Ago

You're welcome
She should be a one proud friend. This is a god write for her. It's simple yet meaningful in so many ways. :) Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
She'd definitely be very glad to read this! It's beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Awe thanks muchly!
She is very lucky, indeed to have someone admire her as much as you do.
Friends are cherished gifts.
Thank you so much for sharing! x

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!
I'm sure whoever this is for will like it very much ^^The rhymes flow very well and it shows your great admiration. Good work and good luck.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Oh thank goodness, I'm quite nervous really lol. Thank you.
That friend is lucky to have you. Very heart warming. Truly beautifully written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're most welcome.
This is dripping with sincerity & gratitude -- something people often forget to express these days. Any friend would be honored to have someone think of them this way. Your writing is truly a gift that's equal to the caring friend you are describing here. Good rhyme & rhythm, too.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much.

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Taz
Taz

Alberta, Canada



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I like to write poems that spontaniously generate in my mind. I am 17 and I am a girl who is in high school so my poems will not be amazing but I do my best.I love my spanish and ASL,I also love basic.. more..

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