To Pieces

To: The One

The way I felt, The way I feel,
Was beautiful, It is so real,
I understand, you may not know,
But just don't leave me in the cold,
You don't know me, yet you do,
And know for sure I hide no truth,
I feel the night was best of all,
My head on you, It fit so well,
Then that was when, my heart it fell,
But please catch it, don't let me down,
I never knew how my heart can,
And now you're here, you blew my plan,
To never fall in love to man,
To Pieces

Author's Note

I am sorry this one has less of a flow, I am not used to happy writing...

Reviews

[Stacy Purvis]

It is a heartfelt piece. I rather enjoyed the flow and the feelings it evoked. Thank you for sharing.

[Taz]

Thank you I am happy you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love comes when love wants.
"And now you're here, you blew my plan,
To never fall in love to man,
To Pieces"
I like the above lines a lot. Thank you Taz for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Taz]

Thanks for reading, happy you like it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome Taz.

[Broken Hearts]

I love how this brings in the reality of life. Well written!

[Taz]

Thank You.

[duff]

I like this. Shields have been dropped leaving the soul to risk all for that feeling we crave so much. Endings are never easy. Nicely written

[Taz]

Thank you but you must remember, not all shields are dropped hence the words, "you do not know me, yet you do."

[duff]

I appreciate the clarity. I got ya now

[Prototato]

Are you kidding? This poem is AMAZING! Yet another work that beautifully resembles real life. Too bad I was never able to experience that. ;~;