Internal Music

I was told to write something happy...

The music that lives, 

Within the soul,

As precious as, 

A mothers hold,

A child somewhere, 

Was born today,

Her love and happy, 

There to stay,

Forever more, 

The music will play,

And forever within, 

Her residence stay 

Making her smile, 

Every day.

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

This is simple elegance and poetically penned. The brevity of the piece captures perfectly magnitude of one of life's miracles, I also love that you drew the music analogy out, underlying the piece. The best part of me is a momma to a wee man, so this is deeply felt! Well done. Regards Ray

[Taz]

Thank You. I am glad it spoke to you.

[Daphnee]

So Perfect and creative ❤ love it!!!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is quite nice :)
music is a wonderful thing, that allot of people enjoy.
I like how you have written about music being part of such a precious moment.
well written :)

[Taz]

It is more of the music that plays within your head while being happy, you must be mindful of it.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Oh ok :)
Well none the less good poem :)

[Taz]

Thank You.