Green Eyes

I know a girl with bright green eyes but she is silent, like me and my green eyes.

They can look
Deep inside
They can seek
And try to find
Behind the wall
That blocks all spies
They will search
But few will find
The story behind
Your true
Green Eyes

Author's Note

This I have made for a girl who I barely know but I know also hides what I do.

Reviews

[ApDunamis]

I like this. It's short and to the point but it evokes imagination.

[Taz]

Thank you.

[LKBillips]

Hidden in plain site. Perhaps a friendship worth pursuing. Trust is a valuable commodity. :)

[Taz]

Thank you for reviewing.

[Tina H.W.]

Oh...wow...short but so deep and emotive. A touch of sadness and hope in there too. I found it beautiful. Thank you for sharing :)

[Taz]

Thank You for reading and reviewing

[Tina H.W.]

My pleasure :)

[Silver]

What do you have behind those eyes

[Taz]

More than you will ever know.

[H.L. Cerveise]

A well written poem about the walls we build to hide what is inside us. It is short but powerful.

Well done

[Taz]

Thank you to tell you the truth I just started writing and it just went from there, this was not planned.

[H.L. Cerveise]

Some poems are planned and others are not that is how it works for me and I think many other Warrior Poets

[Taz]

Honestly I do not really plan anything I just write what comes to my mind when I think of certain things, people and memories.

[Mr.Writer]

Short and sweet... Short and powerful...Short and engaging...
Keep on writing...

[Taz]

Thank you I will

[Gina]

I love this. It was short, and it enraptured me. You have truth behind your poems. Your words help me more than you know. I understand what blocking it out (everything) feels like. AMAZING, just amazing.

Always, Gina

[Taz]

I have just made another

[Najam Us Saher]

That's true. No one can understand the pain and suffering one goes through. I liked it. Very true and thoughtful.