Beauty Inside

I have made this truth for a friend. And for anyone who feels they are alone. Your not.

Looking into hurting eyes,

 I feel the pain you have inside. 

I will stay beside you here, 

To wipe away the scarring tear. 

Help you see past the lies,

 Show you the truth

 and beauty 

Inside... 

Inside your heart,

 inside your soul,

 A hidden beauty is untold.

 I know the love thats in your heart,

 Invisible stiches, Hiding scars,

 They are kept,Behind closed bars,

 But the Friendship,

That is ours,

 enables me to see the scars,

 I can see past the lies 

and see the Truth, 

your Beauty

 Inside

Author's Note

This poem is made for anyone who is hurt remember you are not alone and there is someone who knows exactly what you are going through.

Reviews

[William Liston]

I love the message of this piece as well as the analogies you used to convey it. I've always believed that everyone has beauty inside them, and no matter how dire the circumstance, it's always present, maybe less noticeable, but always present. I think your poem is very inspirational and a good reminder that there's always someone who shares our pain. Thank you for sharing.

- William Liston

PS: In line 10, "thats" needs to be "that's" (with the apostrophe). Also, put a space after the comma in "kept,Behind"

[Taz]

Thank you for the corrections I will fix it and I am happy you liked the message.

[Anjali]

this is beautiful! keep on writing!

[ApDunamis]

I really enjoyed this. Continue to write young lady.

[Darling]

Beautiful poem. You captures the true emotions of when we feel hurt in our soul. Darling.

[Diamond]

I have gone through a couple of writings of yours. And I see that there is an intriguing depth in them. For the age of 16, if your thoughts can be so deep, it is a MUST for you to let your energies in the right direction. You write very nicely and never stop writing.

[Taz]

Thank you very much I do have alot of things that come into my mind and I just write them down.

[...]

Words full of compassion and trust. This probably what i like it most. From all your poems. Have it very gentle form.

[Taz]

I always like to have a certain rythem to my poems... like a song

[...]

Yes maybe you can try them sing.

[Taz]

I don't make music although Ed Sheeren is my idol.

[...]

Maybe one day you will. Life is full of suprise , We dont know what will be next.

[Taz]

Maybe, but until then I will continue writing depressing poems.

[ApDunamis]

Love this poems flow. I am obsessed with poems that flow well and you did a great job. I also was just telling myself this last night. Your never alone. Keep writing.

[Taz]

Thank you so much for your kind review I am very grateful for it.

[Broken Hearts]

Wow this is so beautifully written! Hope you'll continue to write.

[Taz]

Thank you for yor kind encouragement.

[David Adedokun]

That's great, real and natural Taz. Do More...

[Taz]

Thank you all for your kind reviews

[Catlen]

That's a lovely poem. Well done!

[Taz]

Thank you.