Frozen Cold

Frozen Cold

A Poem by Taz
"

I do not need to explain

"
Innocent
 Eyes closed 
Lifted up 
Then controlled
 Bound by whisper
 Gagged by fear
 Silent screames
 Loud and clear
Evil touch 
Innocent gone
 Broken will 
I was his pawn 
Now... 
It's hard to say 
It can't be told 
What happned while
 Frozen Cold.

© 2017 Taz


Author's Note

Taz
This is somehing that is deep in my mind, please ignore any misspellings thank you. Please give me feedback.

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I liked the flow and rhythm in this poem. Words had great rhyming too. Well done. Nicely written ☺

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank You.
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome ☺
Wow this is such a powerful and emotion-filled piece! Thanks for sharing.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
wow so powerful with emotion. I feel sad that this could happen but empowered that writing can be an outlet and make people think.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Don't worry I will when I have time.
K.L. Ravns

7 Years Ago

for some reason it just worked. After trying for two days to send requests it magically worked.
Taz

7 Years Ago

lol it is ok.
So powerful and filled with so much emotion. Beautifully done dear!

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank You my friend.
Haha, I guess there is something hidden in your words, I felt so.....and your work is pretty good here, short with apt. Words, a story well written in few lines....:)

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
I love the emotion you poured into it. You really have a talent for writing. I'm so sorry that an event like that would have to be on your mind.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

If I didn't pour out the emoton here then it woul eat me alive. Thank you for the compliment but I r.. read more
Wow. I want to punch out the one who did this. The feeling of this is just so familiar to me. But whats sad is how young you are and I know how I felt during my experiences so I cant imagine it happening to such a beautiful soul.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much your words mean more than you know.
I feel...frozen. Thank you for sharing.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading.
This was so enthralling. It made me so engaged with your work. Always, Gina.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Added on March 18, 2017
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Taz
Taz

Alberta, Canada



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