Frozen Cold

I do not need to explain

Innocent

 Eyes closed 

Lifted up 

Then controlled

 Bound by whisper

 Gagged by fear

 Silent screames

 Loud and clear

Evil touch 

Innocent gone

 Broken will 

I was his pawn 

Now... 

It's hard to say 

It can't be told 

What happned while

 Frozen Cold.

Author's Note

This is somehing that is deep in my mind, please ignore any misspellings thank you. Please give me feedback.

Reviews

[Sammie Sanchez]

still as good as ever, good work, sorry ive been inactive for awhile

[emipoemi]

I have no words. ......my voice is in my awe!!

You need no feedback here (except the second "innocent" I believe should read "innocence".....other than that, this has great structure and great flow. Well done!

[Mr.Writer]

Such a strong, and powerful poem!
Very easy to read and engaging at the same time!
Well done, keep it up! :)

[Sinbulvinter]

Beautiful work here, very good structure, easy to read but hits hard. You have a wonderful way with words and expressing what you feel using so little words.
I agree with MaryKC, you are a very brave lady. =)

[Taz]

Thank you.

[MaryKC]

Wow, I have read several of your poems now, this one really caught my attention. You are quite talented. I hope you know that. I really like your style of writing. I agree with all of the reviewers, you are a very brave young lady for sharing this. I hope you have found or will find peace with this.

[Taz]

Thank you so much. I really appriciate it.

[Shweta]

I hope aftr writing this you felt better and lighter..the strength of the emotion is felt

[Taz]

Thank you, it helped a bit.

[Prototato]

Such darkness... is sadly relatable. Yet another vividly written and extraordinary piece! Thank you for sharing this with the world.

[Taz]

Thank you,it means a lot.

[Prototato]

I'm glad I could help/make you happy. ^^

[LKBillips]

If I'm reading this right than you're one brave girl for writing this. Experiences like these can stripe one bare of any strength or make you persevere in ways you didn't think possible. I think you're the latter. Through writing may you find the solace you strive for. :)

[Taz]

You are reading it right, The same thing I wrote about in The Evil, Thank you for reading it.

[LKBillips]

You are very welcome. Keep your head up there is always a light through the darkness no matter how faint it is still there.

[Taz]

Thanks, I really appriciate it.

[CAPOLAVORO]

This one is good. It just lack of imagery for me. Good rhyming though. Try to write more with free verse. I think you could be good at that. Write more! :)

[Taz]

Lack of imagery is ok here, it is not something I want anyone else to expirence.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very well penned..powerful poem

[Taz]

Thank You.