Frozen Cold

Frozen Cold

A Poem by Taz
"

I do not need to explain

"
Innocent
 Eyes closed 
Lifted up 
Then controlled
 Bound by whisper
 Gagged by fear
 Silent screames
 Loud and clear
Evil touch 
Innocent gone
 Broken will 
I was his pawn 
Now... 
It's hard to say 
It can't be told 
What happned while
 Frozen Cold.

© 2017 Taz


Author's Note

Taz
This is somehing that is deep in my mind, please ignore any misspellings thank you. Please give me feedback.

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still as good as ever, good work, sorry ive been inactive for awhile


Posted 7 Years Ago


I have no words. ......my voice is in my awe!!

You need no feedback here (except the second "innocent" I believe should read "innocence".....other than that, this has great structure and great flow. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Such a strong, and powerful poem!
Very easy to read and engaging at the same time!
Well done, keep it up! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful work here, very good structure, easy to read but hits hard. You have a wonderful way with words and expressing what you feel using so little words.
I agree with MaryKC, you are a very brave lady. =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
Wow, I have read several of your poems now, this one really caught my attention. You are quite talented. I hope you know that. I really like your style of writing. I agree with all of the reviewers, you are a very brave young lady for sharing this. I hope you have found or will find peace with this.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I really appriciate it.
I hope aftr writing this you felt better and lighter..the strength of the emotion is felt

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you, it helped a bit.
Such darkness... is sadly relatable. Yet another vividly written and extraordinary piece! Thank you for sharing this with the world.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank you,it means a lot.
Prototato

7 Years Ago

I'm glad I could help/make you happy. ^^
If I'm reading this right than you're one brave girl for writing this. Experiences like these can stripe one bare of any strength or make you persevere in ways you didn't think possible. I think you're the latter. Through writing may you find the solace you strive for. :)

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

You are reading it right, The same thing I wrote about in The Evil, Thank you for reading it.
LKBillips

7 Years Ago

You are very welcome. Keep your head up there is always a light through the darkness no matter how f.. read more
Taz

7 Years Ago

Thanks, I really appriciate it.
This one is good. It just lack of imagery for me. Good rhyming though. Try to write more with free verse. I think you could be good at that. Write more! :)

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Lack of imagery is ok here, it is not something I want anyone else to expirence.
Very well penned..powerful poem

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Taz

7 Years Ago

Thank You.

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Added on March 18, 2017
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Taz

Alberta, Canada



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