Stop running away!!!

The more you ran away

More, the weaker you will get

A shadow of gloominess will begin to surround you

And you will shut the door of your life one by one, 

Slowly you will start to feel suffocate and eventually you will die

So, stop running away

And start facing it .

Author's Note

Stop running away from your problem try to face it. That,the message i want to convey.

Reviews

[zunie frost]

This is absolutely great . I really live the way you convey your message !!!! This poem have a deep heartfelt touch . it really touches my heart . I gave it 100000000 points really appreciate the work and the message this poem gives to reader . thanks for sharing such a lovely write

[Quill]

great advice but i still think there are times when running is the best option

[nupur chauhan]

well described the situation ... dat an escapist face in his or her life ....keep it up ... nice piece of work

[Sarah King]

unconditionally reminded me the song of Sia, Alive, so meaningful and yes we all must be strong! well done! :)

[Southern_Writes]

Wow, very true message, great work. It's easy to run away...at first, but slowly the demons you have locked away will rot you from the inside.

[andrew mitchell]

A nice write with a profound message face your fears!

[Gaurav]

So, we welcome the world to face obstacles. It is a poem dedicated to bravery. I loved it.

[Lavorther]

Very true. Running away from your problems or feelings will only make it worse, you will have to face it to overcome the obstacles of life. Well done.

[Mister T.]

Great poem! I really agree with the message you transfer to us, the readers. Do not run away from your feelings, embrace them. Powerful statement! Everyone should know this!
Besides some minor grammatical errors, you've done a good job on this one!

[M P Ramesh]

Coldfume,

"Let's move forward
without sticking where we stand
those who come behind will,otherwise,
push you down"
Can I give you a rendering of a Malayalam poet named "ULLOOR"?
It's everywhere same. But running is also an art when you see it from otherside
It's a savage inhalation of one's anxiety which our species inherit for long.
Run ...run ...run.... for an opening and involvement, but never run away from anything

we got it...............


carry on.......


MP Ramesh

[Blackheart]

Very much powerful and a beautiful message. Really liked it. :)