true love

i look into your eyes.

as you take my soft little hands.

the magic between us fluttering wildly.

i see the love in your eyes.

as you lean in to kiss me.

i do the same.

and the moment our lips touch.

fireworks fly all around in my mind.

and when we pull away.

i lay my head on your strong chest.

as you hold me close.

stroking my hair and softly petting my back.

i close my eyes.

and let your touch calm me.

and i see sparks fly all around.

and that's how i know.

we are totally, completely..... in love 

Reviews

[myrto]

Great poem, I like the way your poetry is always very descriptive and evocative. It paints a very definite picture. Your meter is like droplets of a poem, each one adding a small but quintessential detail into the mix. It is consistent and ever progressing toward your final and awaited line.