Realization

this poem is about how people dont see me the way they should.

You dont realize,

all the pain I go through everyday.

you dont realize,

Why i act this way.

When will everyone just let me be who i am!

well guess what i have realized that i am loved.

im loved by alot of people.

and i cant just let pain and sadness end my life.

if i do there are alot of people who will miss me.

please save me people.

save me from everyone who likes to make me suffer.

Reviews

[M]

I can appreciate the sincerity of the emotions and the plea at the end. I think the poem would benefit from more detail and perhaps drawing out the ending a bit more. Overall, pretty good. :D