Empty

My life seems so empty,

Like there's something missing in my soul.

Everything I know, everything I've now lost.

My bare feet dragging across the dry, cracked, broken land,

The silver blade, coated in the crimson blood that flows throughout my veins.

The salted tears that stain my face,

My life bleeding me dry taking every last ounce of happiness and replacing it with pain.

That pencil-thin stream of light ever so slowly fading.

Someone pull me out,

Save me from the depths of darkness that I am falling deeper and deeper within.

I have lost hold of your grasp and am now falling to my fate.

Someone please grab me quick before It's to late.

But then again...

Who would want to.......

Reviews

[alan peter kelly]

I can only kill
with love.

[Kim S.]

Someone pull me out,
Save me from the depths of darkness that I am falling deeper and deeper within.
I have lost hold of your grasp and am now falling to my fate.

Love this part so much, such an emotional read, enjoyed this

[Moon]

Sad, but it hits home. I feel like I have been missing so much for a very long time. Though I can never find out what all of the things are that I am missing. A good write Spirit.

[nostal]

The angst is strong in this one.