Porcelain Doll

Her face as bright and lifelike as a flower.

Her cheeks red like a rose.

Her eyes twinkle like the stars in the sky.

She wears that same smile on her face all the time.

She speaks to me at night.

She has a heart of gold.

She's my Porcelain Doll....

She has hair that flows like the river.

And a dress that makes her look like a Princess.

People can't see the value in her like I do.

She's special in every way.

She's my Porcelain Doll...

Her soft giggle.

Her rosy cheeks.

And Twinkling eyes.

Makes her real in my heart.

She's always there when I need her.

She's my Porcelain Doll.....

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Dolls are such great companions, aren't they? Along with stuffed animals. I love the picture you painted with this and my only criticism would be to leave a space between after you say "she's my porceilin doll..." And the next line. That way, each paragraph would seem easier to read and won't seem so cramped together.