I am

I am

A Poem by TaylorFantastic

I am checkered
And I am striped
I am a swirl pattern
And I am covered in stars

I am not this
nor that

I am not one
nor the other

Because
I am checkered
And I am striped
I am a swirl pattern
And I am covered in stars

© 2010 TaylorFantastic


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Good, simple write (without being simple). I like your use of patterns to convey your meaning here, and the imagery works well I think.
One thing that disturbed the flow of this good poem though, was the lack of capitalisation on the two lines beginning with 'nor'....aside from that though, I have a feeling I am going to like your writing......:)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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