I don't have a name for it but I like it. Name suggestions?

It's pretty much my take on life and what you make of it. My first piece in a long time so just let me know what you think.

pray, for the life that will never be yours

ask, forgiveness for what you have done

if you think it will help

but i. will. not

no i refuse

i do not hold regret

for a single choice that i have made

because everything, i have been through

is the reason that i, stand as a man in this day

no i will not ask forgiveness for

the things that have caused me to grow

and i will not bow

to the mercy of this thing called fate

no this life is mine

and will be whatever i choose to make

of it, and in time

we will all stray, away from these lines

that stand as the barriers between

what we know to be, black and white

our mistakes, are what cause us to grow as men

and every day, i give thanks to every sin

for i am proud of who i am now

and fear what i would have been

youre asking for direction

when all you need is to grow

so stay, kneeling on your knees

asking for, everything that you have wanted to be

but as for me

i will be on my way to succeed

Author's Note

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[Work in progress]

augmenting? Love your writings, I'm always impressed...
aug·ment
   [v. awg-ment; n. awg-ment] Show IPA
verb (used with object)
1.
to make larger; enlarge in size, number, strength, or extent; increase: His salary is augmented by a small inheritance.
2.
Music .
a.
to raise (the upper note of an interval or chord) by a half step.
b.
to double the note values of (a theme): In the fugue's development the subject is augmented.
3.
Grammar . to add an augment to.
4.
Heraldry . to grant an augmentation to (a coat of arms).

[Clarisse Nanoit]

This seems a direct reflection of deep thought. It doesn't say anything truly profound or new, but I bet you hold this piece dear. I do love the recurring thought of how one's decisions and the consequences of those shape the person one becomes. Maybe play off of that for a title? I enjoyed reading.
KH