A Journey Through My Heart

a journey through my heart

come my friend

come with me, and take my hand

let me take you for a ride

through the veins, the arteries

femoral to vena cava, full circle to the heart

where my depression lies, buried so deep

let me take you for a ride

into the darkest of my mind, 

untouched even in sleep

Here, where my heart should be

instead is a shadow, bearing her smile

Here, where we should feel my heartbeat

instead is the shockwave, her unheard sorrow

Here, where i should feel happy

instead i feel nothing, empty

come my friend

come with me, and take my hand

let me take you for a ride

into the womb, 

the womb of my, suicide

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Omar Fendri]

Depression... Depression's yelling aloud through innocent and simple words. A melancholic images have created a depth darkness. The tragic imagination here is speakable and heart-warming. The first stanza 'come my friend ... ' isn't just some couple words that pulled together to made some lines... It's a call to every reader to join you your own misery and feel your emptiness. I could relate to this poetry. Deep and well-written...
'the womb of my, suicide'... LOVE IT

[kdpgrahi]

Some deep feelings well put into words. Some times we all have the same feelings. Well crafted poem I like it. Enjoyed reading