In This Moment

if i could pick up

every piece of your soul i shattered

and build you back up

to your beauty it wouldnt matter

because i pushed you too far

and broke your fragile heart

im sorry for everything i ever did

may i rest in peace

only to burn again

ill

burnn

in the fires of

all that we

once called love

so say your last goodbyes

and take from my hand this scythe

to cut me down

in the f*****g night

 

in this moment

we see everything

thats wrong with us

how did we, end up so crazy

 

this is the world we live in

these are the dangers that we face

falling in love

and making too many, f*****g mistakes

ill take this blade

and end it all

before i say

ill ever f*****g fall

a-gain

i wont let myself break

anyone

as perfect as you

id rather hang myself

with this heart break noose

 

in this moment

we see everything

whats wrong with us

how did we, end up so crazy

 

how do i

break away from this

insanity

and begin to once again exist

but this is my end

and who am i to resis

Author's Note

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Taylor Williams,

Intriguing...

Heart break and insanity do walk hand in hand. We know the path is roughly paved with glass and love. The idea is learn the secrets of the Asian - walk on fire, on glass, tread lightly above hot coals... Be one with love and never allow it to falter your steps.

A lesson learned? When we "hurt people we love - it is not them we hurt".

It seemed, from the start, you were mournful and full of love still for the person, further down the poem abit you start to see anger for the person and then finally you see anger toward yourself.

The format you wish to see is waiting in your soul... go have a sit down with it because you may find other improvements that may satisfy you, greater than any sugestion anyone can give.

I think, honestly, the only improvements that need to be made are those your find inside of you. (what I mean to get across is the only changes that need to be made are the changes that wait within you).

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