Memories of Love Become Dreams of Madness

first one on here in a longggggg while

Get out

I can't take this anymore

Memories reminding me of times

That I once adored

But now I'm living life

Like a broken man

With a long dulled knife

I can't do anything

But live for the moment

That I make it right

Lungs still breathing

Hearts still beating

Step by step

Trying to make it back

Home to you

Eyes still seeing

Hands still feeling

That nothing remains

Of the life that i knew

With you

All these memories

Working their way, into my dreams

Of you

My mind's collapsing

as my sanity's breaking down

I can's take this anymore

Can't do anything

But live for the moment

Live for the moment

That i make, this, right

Lungs still breathing

Hearts still beating

Step by step

Trying to make it back

Home to you

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A qualative piece, I will suggest though that when you re-read your work that you are ruthless when editing.